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Megan Willome's avatar

Upon rereading, I just realized L.L.'s poem is a ghazal:

untold tomorrow

unfold tomorrow

the gold of tomorrow

unrolled tomorrow

remold tomorrow

this cold tomorrow

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Callie R. Feyen's avatar

I knew something was going on with all those tomorrows, but I didn't realize the form. I love all those tomorrows.

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tspoetry's avatar

Love this! :)

Some favorite sections:

"What cherry things do I have that will help me ask the questions I need to ask?"

"Certainly snacking on something sweet and tart will help me with the shimmer and sting of my days."

"I have a palate of paints. Cherry and velvet and rose. There’s buttercup yellow, swampy green, violet purple, too. I can come home, dip my brush in a mason jar of water..."

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Callie R. Feyen's avatar

Thank you. Your words have always been catalysts for me.

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